四級考試寫作範文WhichModeofTravelDoYouLike
英語四級考試寫作範文：Which Mode of Travel Do You Like
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Which Mode of Travel Do You Like?
1. 有的人喜歡參加旅行團旅行。
2. 有的人喜歡自己獨自旅行。
3. 你喜歡的是。。。
When it comes to travel mode, different people have different preferences. Some people are in favor of the package tour. However, others would like to travel on their own.
Those people who hold the first opinion believe package tour saves them a lot of trouble, such as finding the accommodation. In addition, they say, package tour can relatively ensure the safety of the tourists. However, still others think differently. In other opinions, they can get a greater degree of independence and freedom, and can take their time to appreciate the views. Besides, they argue that it will cost less to travel on one’s own than join package tours.
Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. For another, I can decide by myself when to start on my way, where to linger a little longer and which spot to skip over. Considering all these, I think traveling on my own is a better mode of travel.
1. When it comes to 引出有爭議的`話題的常用句式。
2. In addition, ... Besides... 銜接詞語
3. a greater degree of independence and freedom 意為“更大的自由度”。
4. less 注意比較結構的運用。
5. when to start on my way, where to linger a little longer and which spot to skip over 平行結構增加了文章的文采。