優秀的高考英語作文
經典範文
1、表達觀點類在英語課堂上,你喜歡你的老師授課時只用英語,還是英語、漢語兼用?某英語雜誌社就此話題邀請中學生髮表看法。請圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”這個問題,參考所給要點,選擇一種授課形式,寫一篇英語短文。
授課形式一:只用英語優點:有助於提高聽說能力等缺憾:不易聽懂等結論:
授課形式二:英語、漢語兼用優點:易於理解等缺憾:英語氛圍不濃等結論
注意:1.詞數100~120,短文開頭已給出(不計詞數)。
2.參考詞彙:atmosphere 氛圍I prefer my English classes to be taught in...
滿分文(一)
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us. However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed. Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名師點評:審題是作文的第一要素,本文的審題準確無誤。無論是要點的把握還是結構的組織都證明了這一點。本文運用多種複雜句式,整體看來是不錯的。文中的一個複合句式顯示了作者的英語功底。其他出彩短語的使用也很地道,可以參看好句中的'分析。
背誦內容:好詞
1.advantage n.優點2.be familiar with,對某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.氣氛1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. 我更喜歡採用雙語教學,其優點是可以更好地理解老師的話。2 2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
滿分文(二)
I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
名師點評:本文寫作十分成功。語言和句式是本文最大的特點。好詞中詞彙的使用,將作者的意思表達得完整而準確,從而映襯了詞彙的重要性;其次,本文的句式以複雜句為主,表語、定語和狀語從句的使用都十分到位。
應背好詞:1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解釋3. make progress 取得進步應背好句:1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I?d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. 2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表語從句) 因此,我的觀點是,用英文教授,同時對於一些難以理解的內容用中文進行輔助講解。