2016年考研作文範文
範文參考一：
This picture， which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children， consists of two drawings. The first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years ago. The second drawing ， in contrast ， shows what the mother and the daughter are like now. The mother was taking the daughter‘s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.
第一段作者非常樸實的描寫了圖畫內容，沒有過難的詞彙;邏輯清晰：段落總分總，首句為主題句，二三句分述，最後一句總結。亮點還在於句型多變。首句一個簡單句新增插入結構，三句也同樣使用插入語，實現華麗變身。本篇文章由兩圖構成，使用的“in contrast”，“while”
What is intended to show in the picture is clear： parents should help their children when the latter are young， and the children， when growing up， should take care of their parents who have by now grown old. This is what makes a family.
二段詳細闡釋圖畫含義：父母與子女之間應該相攜。值得學習的地方是要變換說法，避免單調重複。
Impacted by the change in lifestyles， China is witnessing some kind of disintegration or loosing of ties in family relationship.Yet， the love between parents and children is not only eternal， but the basic component of a healthy society. Only upon the solid foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built; but if that be loosening， the construction upon it， however towering and glorious， would fall inevitably into debris. Love your parents and love your children.
三段提出了自己的建議和評論。句型更加豐富多樣，不僅採用插入結構(最後一句)，首句採用過去分詞，第三句採用only半倒裝句。
參考範文二：
As is clearly shown in the first picture, a father is watching a video while telling his son to study hard. In the second picture, another father is studying just as his son is doing. What the two pictures intend to illustrate is: rather than make requests to your kids, why not set an example for them?
As an old saying goes, a good example is the best way of persuasion. There is no doubt that parents are of vital importance for the growing-up of their kids. As parents, you should do well what you want your kids to do. Kids' ability to judge right from wrong needs to be developed, so if you are not setting a good example, you may lead them to a wrong way.
Therefore, it is a compelling obligation for parents to set a good example for our kids. As long as we give them the lead by practising what we preaches, our kids will surely follow our way.
【附：考研寫作之銜接詞】
一、文章及段落起始常用的過渡詞語
to begin with 首先
【例】To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas. 首先，在公共場合應該禁菸。
first of all 第一，首先
【例】First of all, many people in remote areas still live in poverty. 第一，在偏遠地區許多人還生活在貧困中。
in the first place 首先
【例】In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. 首先，她能每分鐘閱讀100字。
generally speaking 總體上講
【例】Generally speaking, the more you practice, the more skillfully you can write in English. 總體上講，練習地越多，你英文寫作時就越熟練。
二、文章及段落結尾常用的.過渡詞語
therefore, thus 因此
【例】Thus, taking morning exercises regularly may reduce the chances of getting sick. 因此，定期進行晨練可以減少生病的機率。
in conclusion 總之，最後
【例】In conclusion, universities should give larger amount of money to libraries. 最後，高校應該給圖書館大量撥款。
in brief, in a nutshell 簡言之
【例】In brief, birth control is of vital importance in China. 簡言之，計劃生育在對中國來說是十分重要的。
to sum up 總而言之
【例】To sum up, out of sight, out of mind. 總而言之，眼不見，心不煩。
in a word 總之
【例】In a word, country life is more beneficial than city life. 總之，鄉村生活更優於城市生活。
三、常用表示先後次序的過渡詞語
first 第一 second 第二 next 其次，然後 eventually 最後，最終 since then 自此以後 afterward 以後，隨後 meanwhile 同時 therefore 因而 immediately 立刻 finally 最後，最終
【例】Finally, the country must not again go through the war. 最終，這個國家必須避免再次遭受戰爭。
四、常用表示因果關係的過渡詞語
accordingly 於是 for this reason 由於這個原因 as a result of 由……結果 in this way 這樣 consequently 結果，因此 due to 由於…… therefore 因而 because of 因為 thus因為
【例】It rained, for this reason, the game was cancelled. 由於下雨，遊戲取消。
五、常用表示比較和對比的過渡詞語
in contrast with 和……成對照 similarly 同樣 whereas 然而 on the contrary 相反 different from與……不同likewise同樣 equally important 同樣重要 on the other hand 另一方面
【例】Different from Jane, Mary is interested in Maths. 和簡不同，瑪麗對數學比較感興趣。
六、常用表示舉例的過渡詞語
a case in point 恰當的例子 for example 舉例 namely( that is ) 即，這就是說 for instance 舉例
【例】A case in point is the water control project along the Yangtze River. 一個恰當的例子就是長江沿線的水控專案。
七、有關描寫圖表的過渡詞語
during this time 在此期間
【例】During this time, more women took various jobs. 在此期間，更多的婦女找到了各種各樣的工作。
apart from 除了……之外
【例】Apart from the figures, the information below the table also suggests the growth of production. 除了資料之外，表格下面的資訊同樣也反應了生產量的增長。
compared with 與……相比較
【例】Compared with the percentage of the base year, it jumped by 15 percent. 與基準年相比，上升了百分之十五。
from the above table/ chart/ graph 根據上圖(表)所示
【例】From the above chart, it can be seen that changes do occur in the society. 從上面的圖表來看社會確實發生了變化。
八、常用表示強調的過渡詞語
furthermore 此外 moreover 而且 besides 此外 in fact 實際上 also 而且，也 indeed 的確 again 另外，還 in particular 尤其，特別 naturally 當然，自然，必然
【例】Naturally, he denied that he had committed the crime. 他必然不承認自己犯罪了。
九、邏輯連線詞語
先後次序關係：second, last but not the least, seeing…
原因、結果關係：so…, as a result of this, consequently, in consequence
轉折關係：even though, though, regardless of
並列關係：also, as well as, either…or…
遞進關係：not only…but also…, in order to do it…, accordingly
比較關係：when in fact…, similarly, compared with
對比關係：on the contrary, contrary to, conversely
舉例關係：as he explains, like, put it simply, for one thing…for another…
強調關係：particularly, to be true, other things being equal
條件關係：if so, if possible, provide that
歸納總結關係：in brief, in short, the conclusion can be drawn that…