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中考優秀作文:我和朋友之間的故事

中考優秀作文:我和朋友之間的故事

  導語:一個人有朋友的陪伴,所以成長不孤單。下面是yuwenmi小編為大家整理的優秀英語,歡迎閱讀與借鑑,謝謝!

  徵文——我和朋友之間的故事

  在我們成長的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的風景。在相知相伴的`歲月裡,留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶!某英語報社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”為題開展徵文活動,請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章參賽。

  要求:

  故事必須原創;

  80-120詞,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數;

  文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。

  參考要點:

  分享故事(起因,經過,結果……);

  表達感受(幸福,感動,思考……);

  . ……

  A Story Between My Friend And Me

  There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.

  高分範文

  【寫作點撥】本文是一篇命題作文,並給出了參考要點。由題目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知寫作的重點在於敘述故事,並表達感受。寫作時,可選取個人與朋友之間印象深刻,且比較有教育意義的事件。敘述個人故事,要用第一人稱,且時態主要為一般過去時,表達感受時,用一般現在時。

  【高分範文】

  A Story Between My Friend and Me

  There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.

  Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

  In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.