高考英語祝賀信寫作指導
祝賀信是社交中的一種禮儀性信函。通常包括以下幾個方面的內容:說明祝賀事由,表達熱烈、誠摯的祝賀;圍繞祝賀事件表述賀喜內容;表達美好祝福。
寫作"三步走":
說明事由並表達自己衷心的祝賀->展開評論事件、讚揚收信人->再次表達良好祝願
在寫作主要內容的.時候,可以重點讚揚一下當事人的優秀能力和取得成就的原因、並展望他將來的美好發展前景等。
Tips inEnglish
Here are some principles that congratulatoryletters follow:
1. The purpose ofwriting the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deservesthe special message of recognition and praise.
2. The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. These messagesare most effective when they conduct no business.
3. The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational(會談的,談話的).
4. Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. Any delay indelivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.
開頭常用句式
It wasexciting news for me to learn of …
Pleaseaccept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
It was agreat pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
I wasdelighted to learn of your success /achievements in …
I amreally happy to learn that you have been elected…
結尾常用句式
Wish yougood luck!
We wishto share your honor and joy.
I wishyou success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May allgo wonderfully in your new post!
May everyhappiness be yours!
All mybest wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
May eachsucceeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
Everygood wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
閃光詞彙及片語:
delighted:adj. 高興的,欣喜的 achievement: n. 成就,功績
essential:本質的,基本的,重要的 play a ... role: 起......的作用
enhance:v. 提高,增強 comprehensive: adj. 全面的
embrace:v. 擁抱 pave the way for: 為...鋪平道路
brilliant:adj. 燦爛的
書面表達祝賀信寫作模版祝賀信
模板1:Dear_____________,
Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you foryour achievement.
I understand for sure that it is your hardwork / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This newposition, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is boundto ________ . What’s more, I alsobelieve that .
May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
寫作練習
書面表達假如你是高三學生李華,得知你的美國筆友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大學)錄取,請你給他寫一封電子郵件。要點如下:表示祝賀且備受鼓舞;介紹自己目前的學習情況;請教學習方法。注意:1. 詞數100左右; 2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總數; 3. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
書面表達參考範文
DearPeter,
I have received your e-mail. I am veryexcited and inspired by the good news that you have been admitted into Harvard.First I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and Ialso hope to enter a famous university just like you.
Now I want to tell you something aboutmyself. As you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers.However, I’m always feeling stressed out because my efforts don’t seem to payoff, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. Will you be kind enough to giveme some advice?
Iwould appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua