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小升初英語作文寫作三大技巧

2015小升初英語作文寫作三大技巧

  小升初英語寫作技巧之一:用介詞短語替代從句,例

  原句:While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

  修改後:During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

  原句:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

  修改後:At the second traffic light turn left.

  小升初英語寫作技巧之二:刪除諸如"who is”或"that is"之類的關係代詞,變從句為短語,例:

  原句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

  修改後:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

  注:把句中的"three parts"改用形容詞來表達,節省了四個不必要的單詞"which is written in"。我們經常可以將關係代詞如"that"去掉,這隻會引起最少的變動。

  小升初英語寫作技巧之三:剔除你不需要的'單詞,例:

  Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

  寫完這樣的句子後,你自己再讀一遍,挑出單詞"joint"和"telephone",注意刪去不必要的詞。